Mrs. Lilienblum's cloud factory

The precipitous rise of an Israeli tech startup dedicated to making rain in the desert. In a fitting follow-up to his debut story collection,Jerusalem Beach (2021), winner of the Sami Rohr Prize for Jewish Literature, Gefen explores a speculative premise in a mordantly comic tone. As it opens, the middle-aged inventor Sarai Lilienblum is sighted drinking a martini in the Israeli desert after disappearing from her home for several days. One of the reasons this captures media attention is because "home" is a semi-cooperative tourist lodge atop a cliff overlooking a desert crater which primarily draws visitors interested in the case of a long-disappeared Irish hiker named McMurphy. But Mrs. Lilienblum is not out there looking for McMurphy. She's testing her latest invention--an unplugged vacuum cleaner that sucks up sand and emits a cloud, which forthwith dissolves into rain. As they say at the press conference for Cloudies, the startup her children, Eli and Naomi, co-found to promote their mother's invention, "Everyone in this room knows that when Ben-Gurion spoke about making the desert bloom, it was the Cliff he had in mind." The plot gets most of its energy from the siblings' pursuit of various funding schemes. After a wealthy neighbor's offer to underwrite the company falls through, Eli and Naomi pursue a very funny, subtly devised phishing scam under the persona of General Luciano Rodríguez Ancelotti III. Meanwhile, a billionaire named Ben Gould has posted online: "If in four months this device brings down rain on an entire town, I'll make an offer. No lower than twenty million." And so, things kick into high gear. The biggest shortcoming of Gefen's high-spirited fable is character development, often gestured at but never achieved. For example, Sarai Lilienblum often tells her son that they're "made from the same stuff." He wonders if this could be true. So does the reader. No shortage of promising premises. Copyright (c) Kirkus Reviews, used with permission.